The meeting had lasted longer than she thought. She would now have to walk back home. There were no buses at this time of the night. Even if there were, they would not be safe. She did not have enough money for a cab either. So, she had no choice but walk. In those streets. At that time. She would have to walk in the streets that she, and no one, thought were safe. What if someone just appeared in front of her? Someone with a gun? What would she do? Where would she run? Would she survive?
She was afraid. Very. Extremely.
She started walking. She had to. But she was constantly looking around. Constantly stopping to see if she had heard anything.
The streets were empty. She wished there were some people. But then, she would be suspicious of those people. So, she also liked the streets the way they were. She was not sure what she wanted. So, she continued walking.
She freaked out when she saw a dog suddenly appearing in front of her, barking. She yelled at the dog for frightening her like that. The dog did not care. It looked at her and continued its way.
She started walking again, cursing at the dog. She had walked for only a few minutes when she heard some men talking. She looked back. They were there. They were big. They were following her! Though she could not see a gun, she deduced from their manners that they had guns. They were talking loudly and cursing all the time. Although she could not understand what they were talking about because they were still a bit far, she was sure that they were talking about killing her. What else could they be talking about after all?
Trying to look as natural as possible, she started walking faster. The men were still walking slowly. She felt a bit relieved. She would probably reach home before they caught her, if they did not change their speed.
Finally, she saw the door to her house. She now sped up so much that she ended up running to the door. The men were still visible. She reached out for her keys and unlocked the door as quickly as she could. She got in her home and took a relieved, deep breath.
Now she was breathing with her eyes closed, trying to calm down. After a few minutes, she opened her eyes and guess what! She saw the men in front of her, with the dog in their arms. They were in her house! How had they got in here?! What were they doing with the dog? Poor animal!
But wait, they were not doing anything. No movement at all. No talk. Nothing. Why? Were they not here to kill her? Were they not just talking about this a few minutes ago?
She waited for a while. Nothing happened. Then, she went to touch them to see if they were alive. They seemed alive and real. Including the dog. She just slid past them to her room afterwards to save her life and they still did not move.
As she prepared to get into her bed, still in fear, she saw the men and the dog again. They were in her room this time. But again they were not moving at all.
Now she did not care if they were here anymore. She was seeing them now as she had seen them for years before and for years to come. The men were not in the streets, nor in her house, nor in her room. They were right in her; in her mind. They had always been and would always be.
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Wow this is extremely powerful, I loved it
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Oh, thank you! This means a lot! This story actually made me experience short breaths and fear as I was writing. So, I am happy that the senses are reflected on it!
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I was terrified too, the ending was a plot twist and a great one too
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Thank you a billion times!😊
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❤️
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So chilling! I liked the twist at the end. That was a fun read. 🙂
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Thank you! I am very happy that you enjoyed it. PS: I myself almost never get afraid in the dark. This is the muse talking again😊
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We have to let those muses have a voice. They are windows into the magical world of imagination.
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Yes, this is what I am noticing recently (well, since I started writing regularly). I am becoming a different person with each story. Some have some part of me and some almost nothing. The muse is mixing and matching
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I have to say that this was breathtaking! I am amazed at how this small piece of writing could spark many feelings in me. I really love the ending, and I can see a sweet, wise lesson in it. Keep it up, Betül!
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Hey Nada! That is so nice of you❤️ I am happy that the story is serving the purpose of revitalizing feelings😊
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Hi, In reality, what we have (fear) in mind comes as true. Very nice ending of the story. I would say, never reflect negativity in your stories. Thanks!!!
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Hey, thank you for dropping by and for your comment! I am very happy that you liked the end! I intend my stories to reflect a range of emotions, negative or positive. I try to explore the range they can take from one end to the end!
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Wow, scary! but a really good read.
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Thank you! In fact, I got scared myself as I was writing it. But it is what came at the time:)
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Wonderful, I held my breath the whole time I think…my heart racing.
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Thank you so much! This is the best a writer can achieve: getting feelings across
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And you do that expertly…that is not my genre, You are blessed indeed.
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Oh my God, this is so flattering! Thank you thank you thank you!
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