Response to Prompt by Diana Wallace Peach
He had been walking in the empty streets of this strange city without a specific place to go since he had landed on the earth. This was a strange place. It was dark. Too dark. The moon did not seem to do its job of illuminating that well here. His hometown was not like this. There, the moon shined.
He was not used to being in the dark for that long. He continued walking to see if there was any sight of light. But he had failed to see one so far.
‘Poor humans’, he thought. ‘It must be hard to live here.’
He walked around the tall buildings and did not catch a glimpse of the light he was looking for there either. The light was not hiding behind these buildings either.
With that last failure, he thought he should give up on his quest altogether. It was not worth looking for something that apparently did not exist. So, he started walking back to his arrival location. ‘My spaceship should still be there’, he thought.
The moon was finally giving its way to the sun that was coming out from its behind.
Yet, he was boarding on his spaceship to set out for his journey back.
If only he had waited just a little bit more.
He would have liked the earth better with its light.
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Reblogged this on Success Inspirers' World and commented:
Masterpiece
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Thank you! I appreciate the comment and the reblog a lot!
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Great post!!!
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Thank you!:)
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Excellent!
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Thank you!❤️
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Thank you so much for taking up the prompt, Betul. So fun to have an alien perspective. If only he’d waited a little longer. 🙂 I’ll get this all set up for a reblog. Just for future reference, I don’t get the pingback when you link to WP Reader. I found your story as I was browsing websites! I’m so glad I didn’t miss it! Thank you!
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Oh ok! I will be careful about that next time! Thanks😊
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No problem, Betul. I just don’t want to miss any! Thanks so much. 🙂 I have your story all lined up to share.
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Yay💃 thanks!😊
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Love ET stories! 🙂
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Me too!
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Reblogged this on Myths of the Mirror and commented:
Betul brings us a sci-fi story from the alien’s perspective. Happy Sunday!
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Maybe it’s good that the alien didn’t see the sun!
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You think so? What would go wrong?
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Invasion, and a whole new story!
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Hmm, ok, now I agree with you. I am glad he did not see the sun.
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Yay! Glad someone thought of something spacey! Loved it.
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Thank you!😊
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Thank you🙏
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An interesting take. Well done!
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Thank you!
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That was fantastic! Great lesson to be learned there.
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Thank you!😊
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Fun! Thanks for reading JOY Journal and blessings on your weekend!
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Thank you for your stopping by!
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