Hi all,
I want to try out a new segment on my blog. I will write a mini story and I will ask you to complete the story in a few sentences. In the story below, what do you think happened after she smiled at the guy? Let’s finish the story!
Mini Story 1: She was getting a sip from her coffee when she saw that guy. She felt the instant connection that people were talking about. Apparently, that is how love starts. She wanted to live these movies and so, she got up and walked to the guy. The guy had just finished his order. He turned around and saw her. She smiled and your sentences go here
She smiled and said, “Hi, how are you?”
“Would you like to join me, for a second cup of coffee?” 😊
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Nice! Now I am curious what he said.
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Hahah, no! no!
It’s your story! You tell me… 😀
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I can write an end:)
Maybe he said: Oh, didn’t you asks me that before? (referring to people’s conception that such connections are from before we were born)
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She blushes and replies: “well, there’s an empty chair right across from me now.”
There was a pause, she smiles again and continues.
“What are you waiting for, Mr?”
Now now, this is getting interesting! 😀
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Yes! I assume he agreed and sat with her and she started the talk (since she invited him)! And then?
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Maybe she introduced herself and this caused some flashbacks in his mind? From another dimension?
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She smiled and said “Hi” 😊
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And then?
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Oh and then….maybe a simple hi is how the love starts 💕😉
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Nice one!
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She smiled and remembered him from the adventure they took in another version of reality. She leaned close and whispered solicitously in his ear, “Are you ready for another go around?”
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I like this! I believe he was ready to join her!
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To which he replied, “Only if you let me lead this time.”
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And she did, I think? Where did he take her?
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He pulled out a little mirror from his pocket, the very same mirror she had told him to keep with him so many lifetimes ago. As she saw the treasure he had managed to keep, she knew their story had found their happily ever after.
This was the reality they were meant to be together forever in. This was the reality that time would stop and peace would last for they had finally come together in the same time and place.
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I love this!
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This was fun! I’m so glad you had the thought to do this.
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Thank you for contributing to it! I loved the exchanges!
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Oh so did I. I love doing this kind of thing. I am so inspired by back and forths with real people. I love when fortune favors me and I get the opportunity for a blessed back and forth.
Thanks for being there to share words with. Our world is wonderful for its ability to connect instantly with people from all over the world!
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I sure feel you! I am so happy to share with you too (and all my blogger friends!). It is indeed a blessing to be able to express and be received.
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She smiled and asked,’ Do you mind if I sit?’ and the conversation began…
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Anything special about this conversation? Maybe they realized their connection even stronger somehow?
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Yes, can guess. A spark of past maybe.
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Yeah!
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She smiled and said “I got lost in your deep blue eyes and I wanna dive deeper. You mind?”
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Is this the start of a relationship? Did he let her get lost in his eyes?
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He did allow her to dive her deeper.
(And I haven’t thought after that)
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Nice! Their relationship can be another story:)
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She smiled and like a silly teenager felt the butterflies thrash around in her stomach. He was looking straight at her now. She felt the intensity of his gaze and the warmth enveloped her. Maybe a micro-second passed but time seemed to have stopped. Right then in that one moment she could see forever. As she opened her mouth to speak her dancing eyes left his for a heartbeat. She saw his ring.
“Hi, …
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I love this! The end is sad but great completion to the story! Thanks for sharing!
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You’re welcome and thank you 🙂
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She smiled at him. He took one look at her and said “Did you know you’ve got a large piece of spinach stuck in your front teeth?” He then walked away. She stood there feeling mortified.
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Oh that is hard😭 but a nice end to the story😊
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She smiled at him and when he smiled back, she noticed his crooked stained upper central incisors – two black teeth. It was so weird her smile froze. She staggered back to her seat and nearly knocked down a chair. Surprised and thinking she was scared of approaching him, he walked up to her and extended a handshake,.”Hi.” She stiffened. Just then, her order arrived but she couldn’t stay for another second but he smiled again as she took his hand. Her focus was on his teeth. “Do you come here often?” He asked. “Not at all. Actually, this is my first time. My fiance will soon be here, sorry. I don’t want him to think I….” she lied. “I understand….” He said reluctantly returned to his seat wondering why she sat at table for one. She rushed her food and hasten away with her phone placed on her right ear. She was glad he didn’t follow.
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Now that is a continuation I would not think of myself. I love it! Was she uncomfortable with the teeth because she does not like the appearance or because she takes it as a sign of bad personal hygiene?
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😀Shes put off by his horrifying smile. If only his smile was perfect…
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If only…:)
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She smiled and ask to join him. He said “ya sure, please and then girl sit in chair in front of him. She said ” You are looking smart”. He answered, “you too” and then love story begin. They talked together and then walked out.
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Lovely!❤️
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She smiled and winked at him.
He smiled back and then scratched his chin, revealing a wedding ring. Then he said, “Hey there. Want to get a table together?”
“Sure.”
Love comes in all forms after all.
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It does! Sorry for my late reply. Your comment went to spam for some reason and I was away for a while:( Thanks for sharing your continuation. Nice one!
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waited for him to approach her – isn’t that the way it was in the movies she loved.
He continued walking toward her, a cup in each hand. How thoughtful, she thought.
“Excuse me,” he said as he brushed gently past her. “I’d like to reach that table you just left before someone else takes it.”
“Of course,” she said, blushing at his forwardness as she turned to follow.
“Over here, Cynthia!” he called, gesturing with one of the cups.
A woman who could have been from one of those movies waved back and joined him at the table.
She passed them on her way to the door, the blush never leaving her cheeks.
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Aww, sad ending:( But I love it! Maybe someone else will notice her!
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She smiled and he walked right past her. He didn’t even notice her. He was too preoccupied because his mother was sick, but she didn’t know that. She thought he was ignoring her. She went home and cried.
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Ohhh:( Now I wish they come across again at a better time. Would he notice her then?
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Yes he will. But this time she will spill her drink on him to get his attention. He will start to get angry as he looks at the mess on his shirt but as soon as he looks at her face, he is mesmerized by her beauty. He doesn’t say anything, just smiles and as she offers to take his shirt to the dry cleaners, he offers to get her another frappachino.
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Ahhh I love this! Happy ending!
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Thanks
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