Let’s complete the story I start below:
He had woken up with a heavy feeling in his chest in the middle of the night, which did not let him sleep back. After a few unsuccessful attempts to sleep back, he decided to get out of bed and start his day. He felt unusually tired, so whatever he did was half-hearted. To gain a bit more enthusiasm, he went out. All he wanted was to get some fresh air but he would soon witness a surprising incident, which would change his outlook in life and made these days with heavy feelings easier. [Your continuation goes here]
While deciding which way to walk on his busy city street he witnessed the neighborhood homeless man save a distracted young woman from walking straight into the path of a passing bus.
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Oh that is a nice twist! Unexpected!
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Something stirred the shrubs along his path. He took a few steps then decided to see. He did a double take when he saw a squirming baby, asleep. The baby was wrapped in just a white woolly shawl. He ran forward to yell, afraid the baby might wake.
“Hello, anyone there?” He yelled till his voice got hoarse. Then he came back and carried the baby gingerly. It was a boy. He knew what he had to do, there was no need to go back to sleep but back home with his gift.
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Oh that is so cute! The baby lost parents but also gained one! Great ending!
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Yeah maybe.
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He looked left and right, normally he would turn right and walk on up past the old milk shed and past the old fur tree into the dim street lights of the old settlement, but as he passed the front gate he turned left almost as though he himself hadn’t known he would. Walking into the darkness he thinks “should I turn back”, but like a ship without a captain his thoughts seem to have no control over his actions anymore and he walks on barely noticing the cat that dashes across the street in front of him and into the stormwater drain.
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This is great! Engaging! I am curious what will happen now.
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Yes me to. Please continue on.
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I will think!
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As he stepped out the door a leaf fell across his eyes. It was fall. The leaf was red. It was as if he was looking at the world through rose colored glasses.
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That is a nice one! How nature heals us!
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He was just roaming on the rooftop of his house when he saw some intruder in his neighbor’s house. The intruder was coming out and he thought to catch him and handle to police. As he was about to take action, he saw a small little child who rushed to intruder as he came out. What he saw after that was heartbreaking. The intruder stole nothing but food to feed his child. This broke his heart. He was lost in his thoughts. He thought who are the actual criminals – the people like that or ‘ we’ . He came out of his thoughts, went downstairs with an unbelievable energy, took some food from the kitchen and went outside.
As the intruder saw him, he was scared and started to run..but he stopped him and offered food to the child along with his love. He has forgotten his own sadness, he realized his problems are small in infront of people who even find it hard to survive. The incident changed him.
After that he was grounded and he made a decision to help people like this.
This is what came to my mind. I am not a good story writer but that’s my try😄
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This time I didn’t read comment section first, otherwise I can’t make a story😁
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I always thought you could and I still think you can. But however it feels comfortable:)
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I mean when you read other stories, they feel appropriate and then it’s difficult to think of another scenario 😃
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Oh ok. It is better not to have read the comments then:)
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That is a great one! I think you are a great story writer! I love how you reflected on the dilemma and the resolution is also great! It got me thinking what I would do in that situation.
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Glad u liked it!
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Great perspective.
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thank you🙂
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On the street he was walking just with no thoughts.. Due to long sleepless nights he was so mentally tired to barely think about anything.. He was just seeing the things the people his eyes made him to see. He turned on the road to bookstore unknowingly. There by the station side he saw one couple sitting on a bench. He passed them but suddenly he stopped as he saw both of them are disabled. She is legess and he is armless. He felt very sorry and he walked to them instantly. He asked formally if they need anything but they were looking like complete with each otherm.And fresh and happy.. they told him how they switched their abilities with each other. How he carries her every where and be her legs..And how she enjoys feeding him everyday and having dinner together in one plate. He felt ashamed of himself for being so rude with his life as he has more than anything to be happy for. He felt grateful to God and ask to forgive for being mentally disabled. He said to himself, “They are not disabled but “differently abled” people”.
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Oh I like that! There is a great lesson here! ‘Differently abled’ is also a great phrase! Thank you for sharing!
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It’s my pleasure 🙂
Thanks for this initiative which boosts our creativity 🙂🙏
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very nice initiative 🙂
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You can participate any time you like:)
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