‘Why are you silent? Say something.’
She was not used to his silence. She knew something was wrong and he knew that too. But he chose to hide it, from her and from himself. The silence was drowning them both. They knew that. They wanted to assume they would be able to swim up to the surface.
They forgot they were not good swimmers.
‘Is there something wrong? If there is problem, we can maybe work on it.’
Silence.
Rather, rejection of the existence of a problem. Rejection that they were drowning. Assumption that they could swim up.
‘Ok, if you say so.’
She accepted his rejection. He became more cheerful too.
Right then, a shark appeared below them out of nowhere. It pulled them both down. Now, they wouldn’t even have to swim. They would just drown.
Really interesting….😯
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Thanks!
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Sometimes being silent helps you out in knowing so many things😊
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It does! But often, not. Especially when it comes to human interaction.
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Yes, i do agree
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Interesting. Works the imagination.
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Thanks!
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Very interesting! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Many couples go through issues and assume stuff about their partners which ends them up in a confronting situation. All these things could have been avoided in the first place if they just asked, rather than being silent.
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Exactly!
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This is silence is becoming very usual among millennials and gen-z and these fast-track dating apps is making it even worse.
Sometimes I wonder what can be learned from our older generations!
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I totally agree! Just experienced something like this recently.
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😁😁😆 Totally!!
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Nicely written… could feel them in an emotional phase 👍🏻☺️
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Thank you!
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So rather than swimming apart having chance to survive not knowing what the future of uncertainty held.
They choose to die with each as one pure entity…..
Interesting perspective- Sometimes there has been so many Storms wreak havoc that foundation once was strong and resilient now has been eroded and presence of decaying death now consumes morality of LIFE. ” E.O.S
Excellent thank you for insightful mind twister Betul
Slainte
Alex
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They indeed chose that. Thank you!
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I’m not a skilled swimmer but have learned to float with help from others. Thanks for this post.
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If you can float, you will be saved in water. I was not taught how to float but how to swim:(
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I understand. It feels like I was conditioned to treat life like swimming up a waterfall.
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Maybe we can just float instead.
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Wow.
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Thank you!
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Sounds like a slowly dying relationship. Nice writing. 👌💯
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Yes! Thank you!
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Beautiful!!
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Omg 😱
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😦
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This is very good. I had to read it because I wrote about drowning a few days ago; it is always good to compare notes I think.
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Oh, that is a nice coincidence! I am glad you read it! Can you share with me what you wrote?
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Sure 🙂
https://thededengblog.wordpress.com/2020/08/25/drowning/
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Love this!
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Thank you very much Betul. Lovely name!
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