Door shut on me.
Leaving me no air to breathe in
No hope to hold onto.
I could not see anything,
Enjoy anything,
Did not live.
Then the Higher Meaning appeared
Nowhere farther than in me.
I knew then
That the doors had shut
To open the doors in me.
The Doors
To Write or not to Write and What to Write 
The last two verses are epic how you ended it.. amazing poem
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Thank you! I am glad it resonated with you!
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I love your writing! Trust in the lord and all will be good
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Thank you so much! All will be good!
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beautiful💜
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Thank you!💚
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Love this. Really love the last two lines.
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Thank you so much! Let our own doors be open!
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Wow, excellent one dear Erbasi. Loved reading your sweet and heart touching poetry 💝🤗💞
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Oh that is so nice to hear! Thank you so much for the kind compliment.
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You are always welcome dear
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You are blessed with the beauty of words 🤗
More power to your pen🤗
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That is such a sweet compliment! Thank you so much!
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Beautiful 🙂 With self-realization comes real change.
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Thank you! Yes it does.
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love the twist at the end !
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I am glad you do!
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Beautiful Betul.
Doors shut to open new doors. Suffering comes to turn us back to God 💖🙏
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Exactly!
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Lovely 💐
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Thanks!
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Very beautiful…and so true:)
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Thank you!
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Amazing. The last sentence says it all!
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Thank you!
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Lovely write.. Thanks for sharing
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Thank you!
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Lovely write.. Thanks for sharing 😊
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Thanks for the recent like and the fantastic advice; “That the doors had shut
To open the doors in me”.
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Glad it appeals to you!
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